Saturday, April 18, 2009

Heartless Words

Fires of hearty delight,
Sings in joy of merry fragrance,
To breathe the sweet, smell of love,
…screaming out loud,
Of emotions that words fail to convey…

What word is worth to what I feel?
When what I feel, it fails to mean,
Neither joy…nor the longing it does express,
As I write that very delight.

Imprinted words, expression unexpressed,
Lively emotions, defunct meanings of heartless letters,
Take a second chance to change your mind,

Never as it still does bar,
Emotion of a beating heart!

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

heartless words................ ummmmmmmmmm emitions are present but ...... oh my there are lots of words constantly hunted by emotions in this poem!!!!!!!!

Pratik Rimal said...

uh-oh...thanks. I was so happy, "Fires of hearty delight," and was writing something...all of a sudden, I realized that words weren't helping me to convey the emotion that I felt... "Of emotions that words fail to convey…" that's how this poem came out. It's all about the limitations of words...where were you?

Anonymous said...

although limited ,words have conveyed unlimited meaning.well !!!!!!!!!!! i was too busy for myself, and thats it.

Pratik Rimal said...

hmm...and what about now? how busy are you? hmm...like it...although limited, words convey unlimited meanings...but what about umm...silences...the white sheet where nothing is written?

Anonymous said...

speak in silence , words are witten ,but are written in white over a white sheet,always invisible,one who understamds silence can only understand the wrdssss,
about busyness ,,, 3 days have passed since i have gazed at the mirror nicely !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pratik Rimal said...

Hmm...its good to hear from you. The longng of your presence has taught me to miss you in your absence...

that's probably the reason why words are hard to understand...written in white on a white sheet...yeah... agree...and i most certainly do understand silence...3 days have passed since i've known the real me :-)

Anonymous said...

well.... sometimes when the shadow is absent,the light has to work hard to make it to reflect....

Pratik Rimal said...

ya...that's true...should i take it that way then?