Saturday, February 21, 2009

Changing Desire

Would flowers blossom?
In autumn so dry?
When leaves fall down; wither pale and grey,
When everything that lives,
Turns frail and brisk,
In the warm sunny day…
In the serene night…

Oh! and when does one live?
In joyous mood; merry sleep?
When ‘spite the closeness, there is distance,
What does one dread,
When love seems bane?

With pounding mind, shaky hands,
Beating heart that longs your arrival,
In anguish I conceal my screams,
I scream from within; my lips hide my pain,
That pounds for your presence;
“Spring! Oh! spring! Mark your arrival,
For the lifeless autumn is too hard to cope,”

In jubilance where everyone sings,
Springs of love, with a rose so red,
I’ll give to my love,
Farewell autumn, I despise your presence!

17 comments:

Anonymous said...

Spring, Spring...
when are you coming? :(

always distance,
always sadness

:(

Pratik Rimal said...

Spring comes after autumn...that's when the leaves will be together with the trees...a new start...

Anonymous said...

huhuhuhhuhuhu...
Are you okay, P?

Pratik Rimal said...

I guess so...I'm not that well...

Anonymous said...

huhuhuhu. what can I do? :(

Anonymous said...

i cant understand the reason for "distance" troubling you so much???????

Pratik Rimal said...

Anonymous, the distance is indeed torubling me...why? Because there's no togetherness...like the autumn...the leaves don't stay with the trees the way it was meant to be...and that's bothering me...the autumn in the poem, the distance I've written about is alike to me...I'm the autumn, and I long for the spring, when like the leaves that are now detached from the tree will be together...to the place where they belong...

Pratik Rimal said...

Just pray damsel... :-p

Anonymous said...

distance? hmmmmmmmmmmm... distance to whom?

Anonymous said...

distance? hmmmmmmmmmmm... distance to whom?

Pratik Rimal said...

the distance between trees and leaves on autumn... :-p

Anonymous said...

oh thought it was the distance bet the ring and the mid finger :(

Anonymous said...

ok .thats it!!!!!!!!!! i gothcha.

Pratik Rimal said...

This is another distance damsel... :-p

Pratik Rimal said...

Hmm...thanks anonymous... :-)

Anonymous said...

haha, another version of distance? hahaha

Pratik Rimal said...

yeah...another version of distance damsel :-p