Saturday, February 28, 2009

Content! Content!

To an image, she stares and blinks,
With laughter and joy, she grasps its words,
And in her eyes I see the spark,
Of all human existence...soothe my heart,

Thence in her memory, I write a line,
To oldage and forth, I bless to thee,
When everyone in sorrow sheds a tear,
You shall smile...your very enchanting smile,
In it will all, miseries drown,
An angel blessed them all, you're the one.

To put a smile on my face in pain,
To spread your love when all are in despair!

20 comments:

Anonymous said...

is this a happy poem? :( huhuhuhu... it's sad.

Anonymous said...

your happiness still hides sadness in it. dont lie me telling that you have posted a happy poem.but dont worry your happiness is in progress.(smile)

Pratik Rimal said...

Err...what's with you guys? What's a happy poem? I got to look in google...its sad damsel? :-0 ok. it's sad then... :-(

Pratik Rimal said...

I'm not lying anonymous. I know who you are. :-)

Anonymous said...

yeah, it's not a happy poem, is this your idea of happiness? :(

hahahahaha. you know anonymous?

Anonymous said...

sometimes its better for the known things to still remain unknown. thanks for not lying.

Anonymous said...

sometimes its better for the known things to still remain unknown. thanks for not lying.

Anonymous said...

sometimes its better for the known things to still remain unknown. thanks for not lying.

Anonymous said...

sometimes its better for the known things to still remain unknown. thanks for not lying.

Anonymous said...

just kidddding , of course you know who i m , not an alien though but a homo sapien. good poem

Pratik Rimal said...

Lol...yeah...Damsel...how do you write a happy poem? What's a happy poem? Happy is emotional...lol...

Pratik Rimal said...

Ya...I know who you are anonymous...and why should I be lying? haha...of course, you'er a homo sapien, and more properly..................................... . Sometimes its better for the known things to remain unknown/silent...you know why? As Keats says, "Heard melodies are sweeter, Unheard melodies sweeter..."

Anonymous said...

so you are about to give more properness to a homo sapian ...................????.yes and thats the reason why although heard, this homo sapian denies the sweetest melodies.coz too much sweetness proves to be bitter.i do remember how keats said this line about melodies by looking at an silent art.

Anonymous said...

hello anonymous! nice point there, huh...

i like this, coz too much sweetness proves to be bitter.i do remember how keats said this line about melodies by looking at (an) silent art.

happiness? emotional? oooooooooooooppppppppppssssssssssssss. :(

Anonymous said...

hello anonymous! nice point there, huh...

i like this, coz too much sweetness proves to be bitter.i do remember how keats said this line about melodies by looking at (an) silent art.

happiness? emotional? oooooooooooooppppppppppssssssssssssss. :(

Anonymous said...

huh!!!at last. Thanks for the support Damsel.Nice name of urs.

Pratik Rimal said...

What? :-O Ofcourse, too much sweetness is bitter...I didn't say sweetest...I said sweeter by any means...and it's how much you take the sweetness...if you savour like a hungry person, it sure tastes bitter but if you savour it with decency, the sweetness never dies, no matter how many times you eat it... :-p

Pratik Rimal said...

Shut up damsel...who do you now agree with? :-p

Anonymous said...

she agrees with anonymous and thats that .

Pratik Rimal said...

:-O Ok...I agree too then...and check my other blog anonymous...I've posted two new articles...and what about the two new poems? :-)